Today, I have an essay to share. I got this in a class back in college, during which we were randomly given papers written by other members in the class, and then told to edit them. I think the topic must have been open, although I can't recall what I chose as my subject. Anyway, in the paper, the (somewhat illegible) red writing is mine.
Also, never mind the factual accuracy of the "studies" mentioned in the first paragraph. As Wikipedia would say, [citation needed].
I respect copyright but the author of this paper shall remain unknown, and would probably prefer it that way. However, if by chance you happen to be the person that wrote this paper, and you would like to see it credited to your name, by all means let me know. Your student ID number is on the paper, so just tell me what it is and I'll put your name on this.
It should be said, though, that better grammar is expected in an upper-division writing class at what is considered to be one of the "best" public universities in the United States.
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